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Danilo Silva
#41 Posted : Friday, May 20, 2011 9:54:22 PM(UTC)
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Hey guys, i just want to share some more stuff made with Levi's techniques.

 

 

George Kritikos
#42 Posted : Saturday, May 21, 2011 4:25:09 AM(UTC)
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Looks like you've improved your technique judging by these most recent enviro pieces. Im really liking your direction with the first image. If you decide to push further with it, you should look into working up a more interesting and readable background.

Your character is reading pretty flat at the moment. And some of the proportions need a bit of tweaking also. Try out the warp tool. Its prob the quickest way to fix these types of things aswell as tweaking poses.

 

Danilo Silva
#43 Posted : Saturday, June 04, 2011 10:07:18 PM(UTC)
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Hey George, thx a lot!

Since this workshop ended i was focusing a bit more on my 3d classes, but i managed to take the time to do an update on my character piece.

Elias Aboulkacem
#44 Posted : Sunday, June 05, 2011 6:46:38 PM(UTC)
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Hey Danilo!

 

Your character got some great potential - but i think it lacks some more reference usage - like how cloth wraps around a face or how armor is constructed esp the shoulder

just an example i found in the armor-section of wiki commons:

armour

 

Hope you don't mind me painting over your work - its really quick & rough but i hope it makes sense - lenghtened neck and legs and adjusted the armor

 

overpaint

 

As said, great potential, really hope my suggestions help! Keep it up!

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