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Danilo Silva
#21 Posted : Wednesday, April 13, 2011 7:45:53 PM(UTC)
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Some updates on week 2 assigment, i really don't know if i'm in the right road with these.

BTW, i did numerate it in the order they were made.

Danilo Silva
#22 Posted : Thursday, April 14, 2011 7:11:35 PM(UTC)
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Few more studies, i decided to try on some vehicle  too(never did it before).

Danilo Silva
#23 Posted : Thursday, April 14, 2011 9:21:20 PM(UTC)
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more updates.
I've been trying different approaches, not really feeling confident with it yet.

 

Danilo Silva
#24 Posted : Saturday, April 16, 2011 9:25:16 PM(UTC)
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I'm about to call week 2 assigment done. Even hardworking I coudnt progress much on this, i'm a bit sad. lol :P

 

Edwin Rhemrev
#25 Posted : Sunday, April 17, 2011 3:10:47 AM(UTC)
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Really like the first thumb on post #23, as this is one of the few thumbs you have a very good focal point (by adding the white).

If you take a look at the other thumbs, they don't have this contrast. If you'd lighten the sky a bit more on those other thumbnails, the houses would be much better readable. You are already doing this a bit better in your colored version.

Also try to tighten up your lines a bit though, they are all have  blurry edges. Especially a focal point like the cross on top of that roof you'd want to have very crisph lines, I usually use the lasso tool to create the shape, and then fill it, as this leaves a very sharp and readable edge.

Hope this helps, best of luck with the new assingments!

-Edwin

Danilo Silva
#26 Posted : Tuesday, April 19, 2011 7:04:06 PM(UTC)
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Edwin Rhemrev wrote:

Really like the first thumb on post #23, as this is one of the few thumbs you have a very good focal point (by adding the white).

If you take a look at the other thumbs, they don't have this contrast. If you'd lighten the sky a bit more on those other thumbnails, the houses would be much better readable. You are already doing this a bit better in your colored version.

Also try to tighten up your lines a bit though, they are all have  blurry edges. Especially a focal point like the cross on top of that roof you'd want to have very crisph lines, I usually use the lasso tool to create the shape, and then fill it, as this leaves a very sharp and readable edge.

Hope this helps, best of luck with the new assingments!

-Edwin

 

Thanks for you help man!

Danilo Silva
#27 Posted : Tuesday, April 19, 2011 7:08:41 PM(UTC)
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Hey guys, i've been trying some environment stuff this week. This one here i want to share, maybe i can have some tips from you.
BTW, Tom's lecture was mind blowing! :)





I'll post more soon.

Levi Hopkins
#28 Posted : Wednesday, April 20, 2011 9:06:27 AM(UTC)
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Danilo-

I did a quick paintover of your piece. I felt like it read flat due to no real clear definition between your foreground (the character) and midground (the rock). Also, it would be nice if the rock receeded into the distance. You can do this by hazing it out and pushing the values back.

Also, the rock feels very blobby and has a consistent texture and shape from left to right on your canvas. You want to give an opportunity for the eye to rest and not be overwhelmed by an even texture spread across the canvas.

Rocks are a great opportunity to just let your mind wander and experiment with shapes so i recommend really pushing things: use the transform tool, erase things out, copy and paste pieces directly within your canvas, etc.... On my paintover you basically provided everything for me and i did very little actual painting.

Nice work though and lets see what's next!

 

-Levi

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Danilo Silva
#29 Posted : Friday, April 22, 2011 12:37:59 AM(UTC)
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Thanks for the tips Levi, it for sure openned my mind a bit more. :]

I don't if it's going to turn out better, but i'm still trying. This one i managed to do today:



I'll post more soon.

Danilo Silva
#30 Posted : Friday, April 29, 2011 4:25:07 PM(UTC)
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Hey guys,
i've been working on updates on previous assigments, as well as this week lesson. As always critics and comments are welcome! :)
So there goes the updates:

Week 1:

 

Week 2:


 

Week 3:

 

Week 4:



 

Danilo Silva
#31 Posted : Tuesday, May 03, 2011 10:26:27 AM(UTC)
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Hey guys, i just want to share some week 5 stuff, i'm still experimenting with 3d for this purposes and having fun.

 

 

 

 

flaptraps
#32 Posted : Tuesday, May 10, 2011 11:50:34 AM(UTC)
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Hi Danilo,

 

you have some great stuff happening with your cover you did, i did a quick little paint over just to show some things i might change, and also put some notes on there.

I thought it would be cool if you played with some patterns for the guys cloak, it's a great way to define form and shape within an image. but like i said you have some great variations and colors going on good job!

 

rich

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Danilo Silva
#33 Posted : Friday, May 13, 2011 9:17:50 AM(UTC)
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Hey Rich,
I'm glad you pointed me so sweet directions in my cover. I hope to assimilate that as soon as possible and try to evolve that into a better image. :)

Danilo Silva
#34 Posted : Friday, May 13, 2011 9:21:25 AM(UTC)
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Week 6:


Danilo Silva
#35 Posted : Friday, May 13, 2011 10:03:13 PM(UTC)
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Update on Week 4 stuff trying to follow Rich's tips, I hope I did better this time. :)




Stokes
#36 Posted : Monday, May 16, 2011 5:08:01 PM(UTC)
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Hey Danilo, those 3d block ins are looking promising. I would recomend doing a few more so that you can pick the most promising one to start painting.

Danilo Silva
#37 Posted : Tuesday, May 17, 2011 4:16:09 PM(UTC)
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Stokes wrote:

Hey Danilo, those 3d block ins are looking promising. I would recomend doing a few more so that you can pick the most promising one to start painting.



Hey Stokes, thanks for looking at it. I've been working on one more and i'll share it here and starting painting over it asap(it sucks to depend on a friend to get a simple render with good light).
Cheers!

Danilo Silva
#38 Posted : Tuesday, May 17, 2011 4:25:22 PM(UTC)
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I've been strugglin with this for a couple of days, can't really reach that loose feel, which bothers me a bit. Any critics and suggestions will be very welcome. ;)

Week 7 W.I.P: 

Danilo Silva
#39 Posted : Wednesday, May 18, 2011 8:22:20 PM(UTC)
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I've been making few changes so no more poncho and a bit more armor. :)
C&C are welcome!

Week 7 W.I.P:

Danilo Silva
#40 Posted : Thursday, May 19, 2011 6:04:02 PM(UTC)
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With this i call it done

Week 7:

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